115 學年度一模學生英文作文分享番外篇｜英文作文不知從何下筆？｜試試三岔樹枝狀展題法
英文作文先求有——寫得出來，才能更進一步求好。前面四篇一系列的分享帶大家走過學測衝刺班武陵高中陳同學的第一次模考作文修改過程。今天接著來剖析，他如何運用課堂上練習的「三岔樹枝狀展題法」鋪陳內容，在考場緊迫的時間壓力下，讓作文從無到有。
▋什麼是「三岔樹枝狀展題法」？
➤ 核心邏輯只有一個：大致上以「三」為單位來展開。不論是舉例、論理由還是分析，通通試著「開三岔」！
➤ 練習公式： 1 個核心論點 ➔ 搭配 3 個（理由／原因／實例／細節）
➤ 三大優點：1️⃣ 結構穩固，邏輯清晰 2️⃣ 實例充足，強力說服 3️⃣ 內容充實，告別湊字
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▋今年 7/29 考的全國第一次模擬考英文作文寫作說明
科技改變了家庭互動的方式。請參照下方這兩張圖片，寫一篇文長至少 120 字的英文作文。第一段：描述兩張圖片呈現的差異。第二段：說明造成這個現象的原因，並談談自己的看法。
▋武陵高中陳同學｜一模作文的「三岔樹枝狀圖」
➤【 師生共同修改版 】英文作文全文請見最下方。
➤ 第一段的三岔樹枝狀結構
🌳主幹：家庭互動因科技而改變 → 三岔
① 過去客廳情境 → 三岔 1️⃣ 一起看電視 2️⃣ 聊天 3️⃣ 共渡悠閒時光
② 現在客廳情境 → 三岔 1️⃣ 爸爸平板 2️⃣ 兒子遊戲 3️⃣ 媽媽手機 → 各自平行宇宙
③ 現在晚餐情境 → 三岔 1️⃣ 不說話 2️⃣ 眼睛盯螢幕 3️⃣ 開懷大笑和網友熱絡聊天
結論：科技反而讓家人更疏離
➤ 第二段的三岔樹枝狀結構
🌳主幹：科技造成家人疏離的原因 → 科技便利 → 三岔
1️⃣ 容易取得資訊 2️⃣ 方便享受娛樂 3️⃣ 逐漸依賴，成了不可或缺的同伴
🌳 主幹：對科技疏離的看法→ 以自家經驗為例 → 三岔
1️⃣ 我滑社群
2️⃣ 家人 → 三岔 ① 逛網店 ② 修照片 ③ 追劇
小結論：溝通減少
大結論：應該學習如何平衡科技的使用與家庭生活
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看完後有沒有發現？很多時候，其實不是「沒東西可寫」，而是沒有繼續順著思路往下挖。只要先想到一個好論點，再追問自己：這個現象可能有哪些理由／原因／實例／細節？ 一個想法，就能繼續開枝展葉、自然而然長出更多扎實的內容，根本不需東拉西扯，硬湊字數。這就是我們教研團隊在學測英文寫作課堂上陪學生練習的「三岔樹枝狀展題法」。
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▋師生共同修改版英文作文全文
The rapid advancement of technology has significantly changed our family life. Families used to sit together to watch TV, talk and enjoy quality time together. However, nowadays, family members may still gather in the same living room, but everyone is absorbed in separate virtual worlds. A scene that has become increasingly common in modern households looks like this: The father is using a tablet, the son is playing online games, and the mother is checking her cellphone. With the TV turned off, the atmosphere feels strangely quiet. Even during dinner, family members exchange barely a word. Everyone has their eyes glued to their glowing screens, laughing out loud and chatting enthusiastically—not with their family, but with their online friends. Technology, which is designed to bring us together, has only left us more disconnected than ever.
第二段
Excessive use of digital devices is the main reason for this phenomenon. People can get information and entertainment more conveniently than before, so they gradually depend on technology and see it as their indispensable companion. Their digital gadgets are to them what Doraemon is to Nobita. Take my family, for example. When I feel tired from schoolwork, I usually grab my cellphone first and scroll through social media, because it helps me relax. My family members often immerse themselves in browsing online stores, editing photos, or binge-watching Netflix series; we do not spend as much time talking to each other as we used to. Overall, I think technology plays an important role in our daily life, but if we use it too much, it may isolate us from our family. We should learn how to balance technology use and family life. Otherwise, we may live under the same roof with our hearts growing further apart.
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